Goals: To continue to learn and apply strategies to improve our writing.
Active vs Passive Voice-Great Resource and Examples
Notes-Remember "by zombies"!
SAS Writing Reviser Lesson
We will be using SAS Writing Reviser. We will open the SAS Writing Reviser Add-on and look at these two texts to learn more about active vs passive voice. We will look at number 1 and the passive verbs. Then, we will look at the second number 2 for passive verbs. Which is better? Why?
Now, you will open your Walter Mitty Story and begin using SAS Writing Reviser to revise for the following:
Consistent verb tense
Run-on sentences, fragments, and comma splices
In order to receive credit, you will complete this sheet showing me what you revised.